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Translations into Xurnese

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2025 6:57 am
by Yiuel Raumbesrairc
Long time no read!

I just had a little bit of nerd fun tonight, and I wanted to share, working my brain off another translation into Xurnese. I went for Bukameša's taunt to his judges :
"By killing me, you hope to stop me; but you will only end me. I am a movement that has extended sixty years and up and down Niormen, and you have control only over its last few days. Sharp as your blades are, they cannot cut the past. I have already happened."
Here's the result in (modern) Xurnese :
Syu e jesaup rameyn, myes i tey denjidzimayc pel, i palači tasyeyc. Reátuc zú syu; cu rosnel ney li šaup semudeš sum dzušši dmaurij na reátuc zú syu pel, myes palači tagri teyk dim yacanyeyc. Isauri šuayc mir čeyki, cuš tey šizenačuc piyzumex; oraejú.
The initial gerund was quite a challenge, but I think I got it right. To further taunt the judges, it is full of subjunctives (many "yey" appear). I opted to double "I am a movement" to give emphasis on that nice bit of lore of life being a movement. I've used inversions quite intensely, and I am quite satisfied with the very laconic ending "oraejú", that would make Lacedemonians (and ne-Duox) proud. I'm pretty confident with the morphology, especially for the verbs.

With all that, I had to create a single word, piyzumex, for "past", from self created Axunashin peivi-soumax* "before-time". I also created (but really didn't have to) rosnel (from simple concatenation of ros-nel) for "land, country" as I feel Xurnese would avoid actual toponyms in very emotional speeches. Finally, I had to extend the meaning of tey "to cut" to give it a meaning of "to terminate, to finish", to contrast it with "to end", which gives a great parallel later with the cutting/termination of the past.

Re: Translations into Xurnese

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2025 10:22 am
by WeepingElf
Can't say anything on this, but I haven't seen you here for quit a while. Welcome back to the ZBB, Yiuel!

Re: Translations into Xurnese

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2025 12:30 pm
by Raphael
WeepingElf wrote: ↑Fri Jun 20, 2025 10:22 am Can't say anything on this, but I haven't seen you here for quit a while. Welcome back to the ZBB, Yiuel!
Seconded!

Re: Translations into Xurnese

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2025 1:39 pm
by xxx
Bienvenue chez toi, Yiuel...

Re: Translations into Xurnese

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2025 2:25 pm
by Yiuel Raumbesrairc
Thanks all :D

Re: Translations into Xurnese

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2025 1:16 am
by zompist
Very impressive! I will have to look it over in more detail, my Xurnese is a bit rusty. :)

Re: Translations into Xurnese

Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2025 5:04 pm
by sasasha
Just a very belated comment that this is awesome! I hope you find yourself doing some more!