Err... part of me would like them to stay private unless there are any lyricists/vocalists out there with nothing better to do.
The "trying to motivate and encourage each other's creative progress" thread
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mais grand il tour, mais rapid e fort e spes caze la merda
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Unfortunately I haven't gotten far in the main text of my novel, but I've managed it to write a few scenes for which I had already gotten ideas. Together with the few chapters I want to use from my earlier draft, I now have 12,339 words. Given that I plan for the entire thing to be near the lower bound of novel status, at around 40,000 to 50,000 words, I think that's not bad.
Anyone interested in being a beta reader for a quarter of a novel?
I should warn you that it's science fiction, it's a bit unusual compared to much of today's science fiction (no dystopian nightmare, at least in my opinion), and it's heavily influenced by my political views.
Looks like I'm more of a pantser than I had thought I'd be.
Two things I think I learned:
First, in almost any specific time period you've set aside for writing, things get faster after you've typed the first few lines.
Second, if you don't know how to handle a specific thing - how to get a plotline from A to B, where to have the whole plot go for now, whatever - it can be useful to think of every little fictional fact you came up with about the setting, story, and characters. Perhaps a little quirk you gave a specific character a while ago without thinking much about it might play a useful role now.
Anyone interested in being a beta reader for a quarter of a novel?
I should warn you that it's science fiction, it's a bit unusual compared to much of today's science fiction (no dystopian nightmare, at least in my opinion), and it's heavily influenced by my political views.
Looks like I'm more of a pantser than I had thought I'd be.
Two things I think I learned:
First, in almost any specific time period you've set aside for writing, things get faster after you've typed the first few lines.
Second, if you don't know how to handle a specific thing - how to get a plotline from A to B, where to have the whole plot go for now, whatever - it can be useful to think of every little fictional fact you came up with about the setting, story, and characters. Perhaps a little quirk you gave a specific character a while ago without thinking much about it might play a useful role now.
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Re: The "trying to motivate and encourage each other's creative progress" thread
Yes, I'd be interested.
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I'm not entirely comfortable with putting all of what I've written so far out there in the open, so I'll try to handle this by PM. I assume that I can trust most people here.
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After a while of not really doing much work on zeptoforth, I'm now trying to make smaller changes to things that I have largely deferred up to this point. Examples include adding replace mode to zeptoed, adding online help to the block editor, and turning off FAT32 filesystems in blocks storage by default on the PicoCalc (as it is not really of much use after all on the PicoCalc as the PicoCalc already comes with SDHC card storage out of the box, so it can be freed up for traditional Forth blocks storage). I am planning on accumulating small changes for an eventual 1.17.1 release rather than making many tiny releases that would be much more time-consuming to prepare overall.
Yaaludinuya siima d'at yiseka wohadetafa gaare.
Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
Ennadinut'a gaare d'ate eetatadi siiman.
T'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa t'awraa.
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I'd enjoy it, but I'm not sure how useful I'd be.
LZ – Lēri Ziwi
PS – Proto Sāzlakuic (ancestor of LZ)
PRk – Proto Rākēwuic
XI – Xú Iạlan
VN – verbal noun
SUP – supine
DIRECT – verbal directional
My language stuff
PS – Proto Sāzlakuic (ancestor of LZ)
PRk – Proto Rākēwuic
XI – Xú Iạlan
VN – verbal noun
SUP – supine
DIRECT – verbal directional
My language stuff
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I mapped out the claims about which dialogue types clash: https://snapshotsofthelabyrinth.photo.b ... -dialogue/rotting bones wrote: ↑Thu Sep 24, 2026 12:27 pm the fourth part of the Derek Banas series went into amazing detail: https://youtu.be/0W6IhL3rcFo
I haven't fully checked it for mistakes yet.
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For the public record, I did, in fact enjoy it, and quite a lot. I can definitely recommend it to anyone who thinks reading fragments of a novel sounds like fun, rather than irritating.
(Raphael did ask me to send this, but only after I sent a much longer and just as positive version by PM)
LZ – Lēri Ziwi
PS – Proto Sāzlakuic (ancestor of LZ)
PRk – Proto Rākēwuic
XI – Xú Iạlan
VN – verbal noun
SUP – supine
DIRECT – verbal directional
My language stuff
PS – Proto Sāzlakuic (ancestor of LZ)
PRk – Proto Rākēwuic
XI – Xú Iạlan
VN – verbal noun
SUP – supine
DIRECT – verbal directional
My language stuff